Walt we are learning to show not tell
Holiday writing - Show not tell
Writing Learning outcome.
To rewrite a piece of my recount [Holiday writing] with show sentences and not tell sentences.
The lagoon was freezing cold, it was like an ice block.. When I hopped in goose bumps appeared because it was freezing cold. When we hopped out I got changed and I went for a walk with my nana and my cousin. While we were walking we found out that Maungapiko echoes. So I opened my mouth as wide as I could and screamed.
Hi gem awesome writing!!! keep up the good work :-)
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