WALT we are learning to use descriptive
vocab in our writing

This is work I have written and edited myself . it is still a work and progress




One night I was sleeping in my nice cozy bed until I heard a bang pow under my bed .I could feel it crawling under my bed. I didn't know what it was, so I took a deep breath and had a quick look. I saw it’s red eyes glowing  and it's sharp claws but I still did't know what it was. The next morning I ran straight to my mum’s bed and woke her up . And said there’s a monster under my bed so mum had a look but there was nothing there . The next night the same thing happened but he or her was scratching on the end of my bed so I said to myself tomorrow night I am going to face my fear and go under that bed it was the next night . l had to do it so I went under my bed and that scary monster I was talking about was my cute puppy Cuddles that explains it all the scratching on the end of my bed. You'd make a really scary monster Cuddle.The end

Have you ever Fourth  there was a monster under your bed ......


it was hard to come up with thous ides to make what was under his bed